averyavary's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pacman]

My thoughts on the art.

1. Design and style. It has a interesting style like a pacman world style. But more realistic. I find it weird that the boots Are as high as pacman. Just a little thing I thought was weird.

2. Color. Need I explain? It's his main colors, would be better with blending and shading.

3 Other Details. It looks good and you did well. Just some color correction and that's about it.

In total. 3.5* it's good and all. But does need shading and blending. Then it would look really good. And ever frontpage!

Ardhamon responds:

Thanks so much for the critique. I could have certainly added in some shading and blending. But other than that I love the support and the review. Thanks so much.

[Smash Girl]

My review on this Piece of Art.

1. Style and Design. The Style of a Super Hero Seems good and balances with her mid size design and tight and limb form.

2. Color. I Like the Color. Would Work better on a Transparent background and it would be a better piece.

Other Details. I like her Position on where she looking at the viewer and also smiling. and dat butt ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

In Total: i give it a 5* its well designed and great piece. would frontpage this beauty.

[Bailey Pinup (style test)]

My Thoughts on the piece of art.

1. Design and Style. I Like the style, the Design is odd as hell. It portrays more boob to Body Average. it shouldn't be that way (Unless you were aiming for a milf pinup. in that case then screw my review.)

2. Color Design. Its colors are very good and they seem to blend together well. just rework the eye colors and it will be perfect.

3. Other Details/flaws. I would say something about the Butt (or how i like to call it Ass to Body Average. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ) but its size with the form seems pretty well to say the least.

In total. i give 4* Its well and all, just work with your form and you should be golden.

[Stream Girl]

My Thoughts to spill on this Pinup

1. Design & Style. It looks Good for a Pinup. and it has a good look. (i'd rebalance that teen rating to mature and even then, its debatable to say that in the least regard.

2. Color. I'll say. it looks very good with the color scheme and blends very well.

3. Other Details. Boobs are well ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) and over all the detail in the drawing is well made

In total. I give 5* Its well and styled very well in my opinion

HellishUrsine responds:

Thank you, working hard to improve.

[Thicc LIbrarian (Wicke)]

My Thoughts on the piece of art

1. Design. I Like the Design (Especially being a Thicc Character ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ) Just Ajust some of her shaping on here arms and it'll look Much better and very clean.

2. Color. Good color and blends all together (With the Thicc ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) )

3. Other things. Very Detailed. and JUICY THICC. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

In all Seriousness. i give it a 4.5* (and 5 for thicc ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ) Its good. Just the arms really and thats about it really.

HellishUrsine responds:

Thank you very much for the critique.

[My Meltdown Icon (Geometry Dash)]

My Thoughts on This Piece of Art.

1. GD. I Know its Geo Dash. ( Play the hell out of it XD) and its cool to upload things like this so ill let it slide.

2. Color. in my personal opinion, you should try using the main games colors, it will give it a clean look to it.

Thats all i want to cover. In total. i say about a 3* its g GD icon, nothing special really. but still fav because of it being GD :D

[Starlight]

My Thoughts To Spill

1: Good Style. I like the style you chose. a cartoony animated feel. Great Stuff.

2:Good Choice Of Color. The Colors Really Blend Together. and it makes it stand out. which i like imo

3:Good Balance I thought at First it was positioned oddly. but when i looked at it again. it seemed pretty well to be balance, good job!

In total: 4.5* I personally liked this. will save.

LinkNiak responds:

THANKS! :DD